My life

My life

A Poem by Thenewriter
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This is actually the first poem I wrote and it's how I see my life.

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This is my life.

My life is unfair!

This is why I hate people.

They all expect you to smile and be happy.

Yet when they ask " what's wrong" ?

They don't really care.

Everyone is so consummed with their own lives;

To busy to help someone in need.

I see all the mother's with their children out shopping

in Walmart and eating at Mcdonalds;

Spending time together and having fun.

If they only new, if they only cared.

What have I done?

Why don't I deserve my kids?

I ask myself.

What did I do that was so wrong?

No I am not happy;

No I am not strong.

I only ware a mask.

To fool everyone around me.

© 2010 Thenewriter


Author's Note

Thenewriter
This is the very first poem I have ever wrote and I wrote it in Febuary this year. So I am still learning. Advice without being harsh would be appriciated. Thanks

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Added on March 23, 2010
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Thenewriter
Thenewriter

Umatilla, OR



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I am new at writing. I just started to write what i feel. more..

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