My Mother

This is about a very much missed mother.

My mother; it's been so long since you left us.

It seems like a lifetime ago; your death was so sudden

and you were so young.

We all believed you would beat the cancer,

All of us prayed, but their was to much.

When you were taken from us;

It was torture to are hearts.

All of us were in disbelief.

We know you are in a better place

 and have no more pain.

For some of us that is comforting

and helps ease the pain.

For others like your daughters;

We can't stop thinking of everything you have missed

and what you will continue to miss in our lives.

Such as Graduations, marriges and grandchildren.

You are missed so much and we will continue

to miss you for the rest of our lives.

We love you Mom.

Author's Note

Please give me tips and be gentle this is my very first ever in my life. I want to write and learn more. So I would appriciate useful tips please.

Reviews

[Art Sun]

Overall a nice poem...your thoughts give that view of when one struggles with a loss...the closeness of family is well expressed and the compassion is also felt...
nice work...