No one Came

It's about a abandoned train. Getting writers block and it goes to a tune my head.

Railway tracks with no where to go

End with pure simplicity

Out in the middle of nowhere

Wondering where to go

 

Railway tracks with no where to go

End with pure simplicity

Out in the middle of no mans land

Hiding from mysterious man

 

Once upon a time

They lived in harmony

Working together, moving together

In their own kind of peace

 

Then one day, No one came

Forgotten was this sad sad train

Humans gone and no one came

 

Railway tracks with no where to go

End with pure simplicity

Out in the middle of no mans land

Hiding from mysterious man

　

Awaits the day

When someone will say.

"What happed too

that old railway?"

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Simple, but effective. I really liked this. Sad, moving, like life i feel...but like life, someone will always be there to appreciate and admire its beauty.....:)

[Coyote Poetry]

There is a lot of cities too quiet and peaceful now. Factories and business left town. I like your story. A sad and lonely story.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem makes you stop and think. It is eye opening and I love how fluid it is