Take Me Back

I hope I can remember the tune I put this to, later on.

I'm sorry

But I have to go

right now.

 

I didnt want to leave

 

I'm on the road now

Driving away

I knew I couldnt stay

 

All alone

In a forgein land

wondering if we will ever be...

 

Baby!

 

I'm sorry for leaving

But I know it's good for you

 

Please dont be angry

Please dont be sad

I didnt want to hurt you

 

I know It hurts me too

But baby I love you

 

Even Though I was the one to leave

Will you take me back?

Reviews

[no one]

But what about the other person's feelings? What if they don't care what's "good" for them? I've always thought that other person should get a say in the matter.

[poetic soul]

wow!!
i jus so simply loved the end....
such a aching feeling it is....
and damn i must say you got courage to say it out loud....
even though i was the one to leave,
will you take me back?

simply wow!!
thanks for sharing!!

:) Love,
Krishna