Live again

Written for the contest Write me somthing about this picture

I dont think you know this

But I can see you standing there

 

Huddled in the corner

In the dark all alone

 

Why do you hide?

Dressed in all black?

Looking so sad

 

Come with me

I will show you

Do not be afraid

 

Take my hand

lets go outside

I can show you the life I live

 

dont worry I will not harm you

Lets just have a talk

Why are you so sad?

 

Your eyes so deep

so full of shimmer

your robes black and tiresome

 

What has live done to you

to make you feel like death

 

I can show you the light

Show you how to live again

All you have to do is listen

Reviews

[Shelley Warner]

A caring poem, compassionate and inviting

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime a offer of friendship can change a life. Poem is very good. Wisdom in your words. A kind smile and a hello can create some happiness in confused souls. A excellent poem.
Coyote