Would you say the same thing

Would you say the same thing

A Poem by Aradie Rain
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random stuff i put together from math class today....well maybe not so random

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What if I told you I loved you

What if I told you I care

Would you tell me you loved me too

or would you leave me hanging there

 

What if i kissed you goodbye?

Would kiss me back?

Knowing if you did

you'd never get me back

 

What if I ran to you

Even though you begged me not to

Gave my life for you

 

Why dont you kiss me now

We could end this Charade

If you danced with me

You would be able to see

that we were meant to be 

 

What if I told you I loved you

What if I told you I care

Would you say the same thing

or would you leave me there

 

 

 

© 2009 Aradie Rain


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i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


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It was awesome.Nothing more.It didn't look random to me.Haha

Posted 14 Years Ago


The poem is beautiful. The questions of love leave us hoping and wishing. Sometime if we try. We can win. A lost become a victory 20 years later. Can make you cry or smile.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


short and sweet i love poems like that its very very good

Posted 14 Years Ago



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