the only exception

I told you a secret,

a secret I didn't mean to harbor.

you see, I didn't believe,

in what I thought could never be.

but darling, you changed my mind,

and in doing so, proved me wrong.

now I cannot deny

all of these feelings I've tried to hide.

but somehow I do,

because I don't want to lose you.

honestly, I'm afraid.

I'm afraid to lose your love.

so I stay quiet,

and bide my time.

someday you will tell me what I want to hear;

I just have to be patient.

I am more than willing to accomodate,

just to be near you.

because darling,

you are my exception.

Author's Note

form the heart for real. and just for him, but he will never know haha tell me what you think?

Reviews

[nostal]

Sweet. I like how the rhyme was on and off.

[Scarlet Pulse]

It has really good rhythm to it. And it is well expressed. One suggestion if you want to take it: I like the second usage of "darling". Maybe you can use another word in the beginning.