truth

cut me open.

no, i don't mind; 

in fact, it helps me feel

whole.

crack me like an egg.

and watch the remains

ooze out onto the table

again.

delve deep

into that black abyss,

and watch me die

inside.

but please,

don't spare me.

give it to me

hard.

Author's Note

very dark......tell me what you think?

Reviews

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

"crack me like an egg.
and watch the remains
ooze out onto the table
again."

That part has an irresistible edge to it.
Jumped out and snapped at me.
Great write. : )

-Elissa : D

[Shelby Baker]

'crack me like an egg. and watch the remains ooze out onto the table' I love that part!!
Being honest with you it didn't hit me that hard BUT THEN again it takes alot to effect me!
Just being honest with you but i do like it.

[caliban]

concentrated and direct. nice job.