i need you

surround me with your warmth,

for this place is cold.

shower me in light;

im scared of this darkness.

heal my wounds;

they are too great in number.

stop these tears from falling,

i would hate to drown in them.

call my name

so that i dont feel so alone.

kiss me softly;

my heart has been numb for too long.

Author's Note

tell me what you think?

Reviews

[fireblossom]

What I think - You allow yourself to be vulnerable and open in this poem. You show longing and sweet sadness. The writing is simple and clear. Very nice.

[Carron]

i think it's a good write. the ursestness comes through in each line. well done :)