my dear alice,

follow the white mouse

as he scampers down that hole.

do you feel yourself floating?

after all, this is your wonderland.

one makes you larger,

and the other makes you small;

as the worm sits and laughs.

remember, this is your wonderland.

don't cry, cant you hear the twins?

they sing softly to make you smile.

follow their voice, my sweet.

they lead deeper into your wonderland.

there is a party just for you.

everyone sits there, just waiting.

you arrive late, and yet no one says a word.

all because this is your wonderland.

as you wonder, you hear that voice.

yes, the soft mewing of your insides.

it calls to you,"more, more, more."

is this truly your wonderland?

you wander into the great hall,

only to find bright lights.

yet, everything goes black.

and you realize this is not your wonderland.

no, this is a simple nightmare.

but we hope you wake up,

though it looks as if you went too far,

my dear alice.

Reviews

[frnd]

This is such a truly powerful write. As I read I got more and more drawn into he way it seemed to spiral down, reminding me in fact of the way Alice fell into the rabbit hole. Your use of imagery is so well done and the duplicity is engrossing. Using the example of the Alice story and ending it so darkly fits with the true nature of the story. This was a very delightful read.

[deeps]

This is wonderful, it held my attention.
I like how you ended so true too really.
Powerful write I agree on.
This is amazing.