habits

i look at you and start to cry.

i hide you from everyone,

just to make sure you are safe.

you are my dirty little secret.

you are in my mind,

and you are in my arms.

i am on your lips,

and you are my dirty little secret.

i can taste you on my tongue,

and i can feel you against my skin.

but i dare not tell anyone,

because you are my dirty little secret.

but you are not the only secret i keep.

and i fear you wont

ever find out my only other cipher.

so what is my other dirty little secret, you ask?

i love you.

Reviews

[deeps]

I really like this, you said what you needed to.
Well said and very well expressed.

[FuMiko]

I like your idea, but it flowed almost blockishly, for lack of other words.
It seemed like a series of lines, rather than moving from one to another. It seemed as if it stated, rather than said in any meaningful way.

It didn't seem to convey very much emotion, either.