la luna

there she is,

standing on the cliff.

she is everything

that i wish to be.

even in the night

she shines.

i only dream

of being that pretty.

for she is la luna,

and she sees all.

even those tears

that come from me.

Reviews

[frnd]

Simple yet very expressive. I like how you personify the moon into someone that can see all, even what you try to hide, with her shining light.

[D. Pesek]

this is really good! I enjoyed reading it and I also like how la luna could be the moon, or a person.