scream it from the top of my lungs

i like the wording on this one.

 your little comments

dont bite quite like they used to.

they would grab hold

and rip my heart to shreds.

but recently,

ive noticed a wall of stone.

that stone has fallen perfectly

to protect the delicate flesh that i hold dear.

that same flesh that was once so clean,

innocent,

pure,

perfect.

so whisper.

i relish the thought

that you might be saying

what you are too afraid to say to my face.

it only means that this stone wall will become harder

until it is

completely

solid.

maybe then,

when that part of me is closed off,

i wont have to worry

about feeding the beast.

Author's Note

tell me what you think, thanks.

Reviews

[Renia Cipriani]

I agree with MadisonBlue, this is pretty deep. I would suggest editing it a bit. It would make it look a bit more structured. I hope to read more from you soon. :) Keep it up. I'm sorry I have not much more to offer with this piece. It's nearly 5am in the morning. XD

[MadasonBlue]

Wow. This is very deep. I love it.
The wall and the beast are wonderful extended metaphors.