I Am Born

Out of tears I am born
A drop,
drowned amidst others

The ripples carry me through,
carry me across
Drops burbling around

I am born
And I am drowned
And I fuse

I embrace silence
My heart kisses death
And more tears come

I am born
And I die.
Tears of my own making

Maybe
It’s only to die
That I am born

Out of tears

Tears that flow
In my veins.

Blood drops down my cheeks
My eyes wallow in a pool
A pool where I am buried

In tears I am born
With tears
I am born

Only

To depart

.

Reviews

[Trixx_Gnzlz]

i loved it

[Lily Mae]

Excellent write..:)

[paradise]

I love this vdery emotional thumbs up :D

[J. J. Nightingale]

It is all the in-between that counts .. Can we make a difference from the GIFT ...

HUGS .. be well .. Jasmine

[Alewis]

great write i love the message u have here good job

[Hannah Paige]

We are born to live, and we live to die. But spare yourself the tears; we can do some great things while we're here.

100/100 by the way.

[EMMIE]

I LOVE THIS POEM!
I embrace silence
My heart kisses death
And more tears come

AND...

Maybe
It’s only to die
That I am born

THAT IS TRUE IN WAY. WE ARE BORN ONLY TO DIE OR MAYBE WE DIE ONLY TO BE BORN AGAIN. GREAT WRITE!

[Jacques]

i really liked this poem . thanks for the read request , the poem itself was really enjoyable to read and it has alot of power and demand . great write but from what i've read . i do think this is you at your best and is an improvement from some other poems i've read and it's nice to see that you're progressing and you might not even know it but , you are and it's always good to learn something and to correct mistakes and to escalate and look beyond to become a better writer . it's not important if you're not as good as another writer say in your mind as if you like to write , write and they will come .

[Pratik]

Good one my friend...silence and tears....they never seem to desert us, isn't it?? Nicely put together

[LilMissWriter17]

Really good write :)