Section Me

Section my veins
And plant the seeds of your love
Deep in my flesh

Let it creep
Along the pipelines

Let it swim
In the river of life

Section my brains
And paint your image
Along the sinews of grey

Mould them
Into the statue of love

Etch yourself
In the engine of reason

Section my pains
And sprinkle the salt of sugar
Make a lemonade of your love

Give me a drink
Of the poisoned nectar
Let my parched lips kiss
The chalice of doom

Open my skull
And irrigate my brains
Let my veins
Drain

Sow the seeds of my pains
Bury them in me

Let the needle flow
And pierce its way
Let it unblock
Unclog the holes
Let my veins breathe

Section me
And free me

Free me of my blood
Free me of my thoughts
Carve open my soul
Take out my bowels

Rinse my inner parts in acid
Give it an alkaline bath
Purify it with corrosive
Explode the insanity of my heart

But give me…

The roots of your love tingle too much

Reviews

[realmwriter]

This is perhaps the most visceral of poems I've read on this sight. Brilliant, Simply Brilliant!

[EMF]

Wow. So real and visceral. Wonderful read.

[~*. Jade Black .*~]

This was great I loved reading it.

[Rene Velez]

Abrasive, loving, endearing, dark, and nurturing, really nice

[CT]

This is, needless to say, a wonderfully happy and uplifting poem. as soon as I started reading, it conjured up wonderful mental images of lollipops and gumdrops and butterflies and pink unicorns skipping and prancing joyfully through the Cotton Candy Meadows. Okay, blatant facetiousness aside, this is a very good poem. The word choice for almost all the verses is spot on, and while the composition is rather jagged, it fits the poem's theme and style. Good job.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

The usage of the catheeter is purifying whatver the needs, Nice flow of the blood of red, good write.........

[KAREN]

Very dark, the imagery is great.

[Raquisha]

Good imagery, overall FANTASTIC!!

[Que]

Fantastic poem, I loved it. It has great imagery.
Favourite lines:
"Section my veins
And plant the seeds of your love
Deep in my flesh"
It's all very simple, yet has a large impact on the reader.
Great job!
Cheers and have a good day. :)

[Dove]

This is very interesting and i mean that in a good way. The language in here is purely amazing. I love it. Great job.