Section Me

Section my veins
And plant the seeds of your love
Deep in my flesh

Let it creep
Along the pipelines

Let it swim
In the river of life

Section my brains
And paint your image
Along the sinews of grey

Mould them
Into the statue of love

Etch yourself
In the engine of reason

Section my pains
And sprinkle the salt of sugar
Make a lemonade of your love

Give me a drink
Of the poisoned nectar
Let my parched lips kiss
The chalice of doom

Open my skull
And irrigate my brains
Let my veins
Drain

Sow the seeds of my pains
Bury them in me

Let the needle flow
And pierce its way
Let it unblock
Unclog the holes
Let my veins breathe

Section me
And free me

Free me of my blood
Free me of my thoughts
Carve open my soul
Take out my bowels

Rinse my inner parts in acid
Give it an alkaline bath
Purify it with corrosive
Explode the insanity of my heart

But give me…

The roots of your love tingle too much

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Gracceful and poised, is this poem was a person, they surely would be in a portrait.

[Trixx_Gnzlz]

wonderful...

[Niko Timmy]

Nice poem. Good descriptions and well-written.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Ugh. First time I read it I had goosbumps and was really creeped out with the idea of piercing and worming under the skin (disection is not the greatest thing for my stomach sometimes.) but I read it again and I GOT it.
So very vivid and intriguing in it's own personal way.

[Amila Jay]

wow, what a poem!!! cool imagery there, nice:)

[Audrey Howitt]

There is so much that is unexpected in this piece. Really well done!

[Science girl]

Oooo gave me goosebumps! Great piece! Glad I read this! Keep it up!

[RienKelsoCinema]

Very interesting setup you have here. You have a few topics and interpretations that I have interpreted differently. "Plant the seeds" as giving you new life. I thought of just "freeing you from your pain" as end your life. The inner pain could be the life that is lived. Almost like the life itself is lived through the this poem. Splendid work!

[Lily Mae]

There's so much in this poem that it makes me spin.. it's wonderful and I really love it.. The deep embedded love that tingles to much..xx