Section Me

Section Me

A Poem by ShameemAkhtar

Section my veins
And plant the seeds of your love
Deep in my flesh


Let it creep
Along the pipelines

Let it swim
In the river of life


Section my brains
And paint your image
Along the sinews of grey


Mould them
Into the statue of love

Etch yourself
In the engine of reason


Section my pains
And sprinkle the salt of sugar
Make a lemonade of your love


Give me a drink
Of the poisoned nectar
Let my parched lips kiss
The chalice of doom


Open my skull
And irrigate my brains
Let my veins
Drain


Sow the seeds of my pains
Bury them in me


Let the needle flow
And pierce its way
Let it unblock
Unclog the holes
Let my veins breathe


Section me
And free me


Free me of my blood
Free me of my thoughts
Carve open my soul
Take out my bowels


Rinse my inner parts in acid
Give it an alkaline bath
Purify it with corrosive
Explode the insanity of my heart


But give me…


The roots of your love tingle too much

© 2011 ShameemAkhtar


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Dark, but with a positive ending.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. The image you depicted was so powerful and strong, yet also the raw emotion was just.. There. Everywhere.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The imagery and rhythm of this poem is nothing short of amazing. A few lines really stick out, particularly the last line and "etch yourself in the engine of reason." I really love your work. At times, however, the poem has moments of cliche and overused imagery like "parched lips" but that's just my humble opinion. Please keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Stellar stuff. Heavy indeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


amazing poem, expressed true emotion

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short verse of deep love with a tinge of maschochism...
good job....

Posted 12 Years Ago


love and pain is described in a very complex manner.great write:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your words are dark and dramatic...as love is ,sometimes.. and love can be very complex... well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


love it ! it is so sweet and descriptive i love it love it ! 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


well expressed emotions!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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ShameemAkhtar
ShameemAkhtar

Port Louis, Mauritius



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