Pluck My Eye

Pluck my eye
And play marble

Aim

And

Strike

Aim and strike
With the marble of my eye

Strike her

Strike her rock
Rock her stride

Break her

Rock

Rock her frolics

Survive her heart
-break
Her heart

Into

Pebbles

Gravels

Go to the jeweler

Pick my eye
Polish her rocks

Glisten my marble
Pump the purple of her heart
In the flesh of my marble

Stone
Her rock

Pluck my eye
And aim

Someone
Hand me
A help
Lend me
a hand
-le

handle

The beat

Beat
The heart
Beat

Pluck my eye

Play my marble

I don’t have a hand

Author's Note

Your eyes can speak too...

Imagine two people conversing with their eyes where one loves the other and the other does not.

One pair of eyes tries to melt conquer the other while the other tries to break don the one...

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

ouch! you just pricked my eye..LOL..nice poem and nice language!!!!

[Lily Mae]

The eyes are windows to our souls and have so much to say in their silent stares.. :) excellent write..x

[Dove]

Your style of writing is so UNIQUE! I loved reading this and the flow of the words is absolutely AMAZING! You did a FANTASTIC! job on this piece.

[Teri B]

Lots of muted violence here, which is understandable as the lover thinks, almost with gritted teeth, about the unresponsive beloved.

[Cosmic Dreamer]

Brilliant, the flow of the words is beautiful and unique. The idea behind it is interesting too, and reading again after reading the idea makes it even more meaningful. Well done for another amazing poem

[EMMIE]

THE STYLE IN WHICH YOU WRITE IS SO AMAZING AND UNIQUE. I CAN FEEL THE FLOW AS I READ THIS. LOVE IT!

[Christina May Shanaberg]

You never know why love is hurting you and you can't find a peacefilled way out. How sensitive is your eyes. Great write!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beautiful write, Nice symphony....