Nature's crib

Nature's Crib:

I walked so lonely by the mountainside,

What uncanny thoughts have did I?

To reality, my heart fails to abide,

Walking in loneliness heaved a sigh,

 

Strolling through the flocculent wet land,

As the butterflies flutter on the moist flowers,

Beneath the big splayed tree I stand,

Not knowing I stood there for long hours.

 

Rain had come and laved things clean,

Little squirrels hop by the swift stream,

For the prairie looks fresh, ever so green,

The river flows bright, in sunshine gleam.

 

Never was I in such a euphoric whim,

Deeply involved with the lovely sight,

Forgetting how I was dull and dim,

Now admiring the clouds so white.

 

Feeling of loneliness was never again felt,

In natures crib no being is outcast,

For that’s where our heavenly Lord dwelt,

And gifted us with Mother Nature so vast.

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

true peace comes from the great-outdoors this is a 3-D visual complete with light sound and aroma

[poetic soul]

nothing soothing and serene like nature...at its best!!! loved the picture you used..! liked the read...

[Tina Kline]

What a spectacular scene you paint with your words, on a physical and emotional level. I think this is a splendid poem, one I enjoyed reading a lot!

[Sheila Kline]

Very beautiful with wonderful imagery! I agree with Emma in that you paint an extraordinary scene in your write. I also am impressed with the lovely image you have chosen to accompany your poem!
Thank you for sharing!

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful and very well worded. I really like the title as well. Excellent work..xx

[emmajoy]

What a wonderful array of words! I'm always amazed at your use of the English language and the way in which you paint such extraordinary scenes and emotions. The final stanza is beautiful and more than comforting. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your words. Nature is a gift for the wise in heart and in vision. I like how the story became complete with the strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

This took me out west into my Yellowstone travels.. You have so beautifully described that experience to a T... Lovely, descriptive and a gem..xx