Nature's crib

Nature's Crib:

I walked so lonely by the mountainside,

What uncanny thoughts have did I?

To reality, my heart fails to abide,

Walking in loneliness heaved a sigh,

 

Strolling through the flocculent wet land,

As the butterflies flutter on the moist flowers,

Beneath the big splayed tree I stand,

Not knowing I stood there for long hours.

 

Rain had come and laved things clean,

Little squirrels hop by the swift stream,

For the prairie looks fresh, ever so green,

The river flows bright, in sunshine gleam.

 

Never was I in such a euphoric whim,

Deeply involved with the lovely sight,

Forgetting how I was dull and dim,

Now admiring the clouds so white.

 

Feeling of loneliness was never again felt,

In natures crib no being is outcast,

For that’s where our heavenly Lord dwelt,

And gifted us with Mother Nature so vast.

Reviews

[amdc101]

I love this so much, it's so descriptive and beautiful. Nicely done.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

For a nature poem to rank this high in this tournament it's a tribute to the best of lakes and streams and forests high that you have seen in your vision's eye!

I was whole-heartedly captures by your scene.

[Samantha]

Beautiful, what would I pay to be able to see and feel the scene in my head in real life. A great example for all other people to read, maybe this will change people's mind before they cut down trees to make cities or factories, bring them to see what a beautiful world god have given us.

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem,reminded me somehow of William Wordsworth.Good work.

[Bette]

you did well on this, read wonderfully.

[Christina May Shanaberg]

When we have faith in God, we are never alone. What a beautiful place He gave us to live in. I hate what some for the want of money do to our lovely earth.

A write that really sweeps you into the feeling of it!

[An owl on the moon]

What a warming, wondrous feeling... wrapped in the love of the Lord and sweet nature... her glory shining in and around us. Beautifully voiced...

[Phibby Venable]

hope you know how beautiful this is!

[Sarah]

it paints a picture of a peaceful land...

[kittykat]

i love it. The peace of the land is a wonderful to us...