Nature's crib

Nature's crib

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh









Nature's Crib:



I walked so lonely by the mountainside,

What uncanny thoughts have did I?

To reality, my heart fails to abide,

Walking in loneliness heaved a sigh,

 

Strolling through the flocculent wet land,

As the butterflies flutter on the moist flowers,

Beneath the big splayed tree I stand,

Not knowing I stood there for long hours.

 

Rain had come and laved things clean,

Little squirrels hop by the swift stream,

For the prairie looks fresh, ever so green,

The river flows bright, in sunshine gleam.

 

Never was I in such a euphoric whim,

Deeply involved with the lovely sight,

Forgetting how I was dull and dim,

Now admiring the clouds so white.

 

Feeling of loneliness was never again felt,

In natures crib no being is outcast,

For that’s where our heavenly Lord dwelt,

And gifted us with Mother Nature so vast.

© 2011 Shalini Dinesh


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I love this so much, it's so descriptive and beautiful. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago



For a nature poem to rank this high in this tournament it's a tribute to the best of lakes and streams and forests high that you have seen in your vision's eye!

I was whole-heartedly captures by your scene.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful, what would I pay to be able to see and feel the scene in my head in real life. A great example for all other people to read, maybe this will change people's mind before they cut down trees to make cities or factories, bring them to see what a beautiful world god have given us.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good poem,reminded me somehow of William Wordsworth.Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


you did well on this, read wonderfully.

Posted 12 Years Ago


When we have faith in God, we are never alone. What a beautiful place He gave us to live in. I hate what some for the want of money do to our lovely earth.

A write that really sweeps you into the feeling of it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a warming, wondrous feeling... wrapped in the love of the Lord and sweet nature... her glory shining in and around us. Beautifully voiced...

Posted 12 Years Ago


hope you know how beautiful this is!

Posted 13 Years Ago


it paints a picture of a peaceful land...

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love it. The peace of the land is a wonderful to us...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 15, 2011
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Shalini Dinesh
Shalini Dinesh

Flower Mound, TX



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I'm Shalini Dinesh, someone who finds joy in expressing thoughts and emotions through poetry. I have a deep love for colors, nature, and the calming sound of waves, all of which inspire my writing. My.. more..

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