Miss Betty (LIMERICK)

Miss Betty (LIMERICK)

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh




Miss Betty bought some butter,

To make her face look better,

Ate lots to look bubbly,

But became fat and ugly,

She dumped the butter in gutter.

 


MISS BETTY----->"BUTTER"











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AWARDS/BADGES WON:



Runner up

May 17, 2011




Runner-up Limerick

Aug 27, 2011



© 2011 Shalini Dinesh


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Very cute, I really enjoyed this limerick.
Again, the drawings are a great addition to the poem, lol.
Cheers and have a good day :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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cute & funny real lively, well crafted

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I agree with everyone else! This is cute andfunny mixed together! Keep up the good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


That is so funny! Love the way tou added the pics:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ohhhhh this made me laugh aloud and isn't that a great way to start the working day .. don't ever lose your sense of fun, please.!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ate it up! LOL

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cute!

Posted 13 Years Ago


LOL, This is so cute!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wisdom can be learn from this poem. Butter does taste good. Not good for the figure. Great movement and ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


hahaha..funny!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Shalini Dinesh
Shalini Dinesh

Flower Mound, TX



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I'm Shalini Dinesh, someone who finds joy in expressing thoughts and emotions through poetry. I have a deep love for colors, nature, and the calming sound of waves, all of which inspire my writing. My.. more..

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