Old LADY ! (LIMERICK)

 

An old lady wanted to become young,

So a small magical song she sung,

Upset that it didn’t work

Yowled outside Kirk,

Later in angst she cut her tongue……

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

O.o omg... very sad

[Fran Marie]

lol....cute one... but seems a bit off in the last line.....thanks for sharing

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Sweeet! in a funny way....:)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

"Kirk" seems to come out of nowhere and the last line is not rhythnically right. It has one syllable too many.

[LA Lorena]

Very cute!

[JENY]

nice song....
liked the rhythm of words...