Best Of It

Best Of It...

 

The crunchy yellow leaves

      Dried beneath the feet, crumpled!

The scorching sun, the golden rays

      Embracing your skin, warm!

Scoops of creamy vanilla clouds

      Floating in the bright blue sky, swift!

Freshly bloomed bougainvilleas

      Adorning the green trees, colorful!

The smell of the fresh ice creams

      Tickling with chillness, melting!

The coolness of the evening breeze

      Sliding on and aver you, gently!

Lots more and more to pen

      About the bright summer, enchanting!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

One can feel the warmth.. the brightness of all that is summer... the dance the day brings... This is a smile wrapped with words and yes, it's enchanting!

[Karina Longo]

This is the refreshing, beautiful type of metaphors I love to find at one's poem. We can taste, touch, see and hear such wonderful spoken words. Lovely job!

[Raivenne]

Lovely! I'm so looking forward to when the weather warms up here. Your words make me lust for it even more. Ah, spring and sweet, sweet summer hurry!

[A.Lee]

"Scoops of creamy vanilla clouds"
I love that line! Beautiful. Very nice work, the imagery was great.

[Tina Kline]

Very very beautiful poem about summer. Such delightful summer images, all very enjoyable. Love the motion words you use at the ending of the sentences. Your poem is full of color and motion as well touch. Love this, its wonderful!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very nice.. something for all the senses.. Lovely to read.. lovely to look forward too.. Summer is an enchanting season.. I enjoyed this it is wonderful!

Chloe

[emmajoy]

Wonderfully flowing poem, full of colour and movement and I love the way you've punctuated the second line of each couplet.

'Scoops of creamy vanilla clouds ~ Floating in the bright blue sky, swift!'

[JanieB]

Simply beautiful. Great imagery.