Like the Sea

Reach out to me, high
    Like the ebbing tide,
Encircling, all around
    Casting love spell, deep & wide…

Slide over me, gently    
    Like the ripples on the sea,
Spreading smoothly over
    Struck by cupid’s arrow, we shall be…

Shimmer on me, bright
    Like the golden sun upon the ocean,
Filling with different shades
    Carving perfectly into love’s passion…

Caress me, loving
    Like the milky waves on the shore,
Swinging back and forth constant
    Deep & deeper to its love’s core…




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Awards / Badges won:

Amazing

Jan 8, 2011

• Poetry
• Like the Sea

Love Flash

Jun 11, 2014

• Truly Love, Truly Lust
• Like the Sea

Reviews

[emmajoy]

So much of this is beautiful, 'Filling with different shades ~ Carving perfectly into love’s passion…' and yes, very passionate and loving. Maybe the meter's out a little and could be corrected but, that doesn't detract from the emotion you've re-created with your words.

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using the sea to describe your passionate love is delightful..your metaphors are clear and well used ..love the ending..sweet

[Carrie Manor]

Interesting! I had never thought about expressing love through the ocean and the waves. You painted a marvelous portrait of love that two can feel for one another, it makes my heart "ripple" just thinking of it (:

[Rory CJ Frankson]

What an awesome wave form this picture and the blue font, suits this piece just so wonderfully appropriate! There is a real power here, like the presented reaching wave and the feel of its breadth and glissening wonder, like holding a breath in its marvel. It is a majestic theme, you take to heart and share its energy with a purity.

A beautiful write Poets World, Write On / Right On!
Peace... Romon in Review.