I'm Longing ......

When I wake up in the morning,
With fresh energy and mind,
I’m longing to see your photo,
For the first thing I see should be you.

When I feel the rays of the golden sun,
Spreading warmth all around,
I’m longing to feel the warmth of you,
Sending warmth down my spine and skin.

When I taste the sweetest berries,
Seeping the sweetness through the tongue,
I’m longing to taste the flavor of your lips,
Entangling me in the passion of your kiss.

When I hear the doorbell,
Waking my senses with its volume,
I’m longing it should be you,
Whose lovely face I could see.

When I look up at the stars,
Shinning down on earth,
I’m longing to see your eyes,
Ever shining and looking into mine!

When I fall deep asleep,
Resting my mind and soul,
I’m longing that you should be my dream,
For I don’t want to miss you even while sleep.


Longing For Love ~ Gold Star

Jul 24, 2010

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Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

I could relate so well to this sense of longing.. that wondrous desire for the one you love to be with you. Beautifully expressed and wondrous to read.. and read again.

[emmajoy]

You write wonderfully romantic poetry and this is no exception .. it shows just how a person should feel every moment of the day or night.

'When I feel the rays of the golden sun,
Spreading warmth all around,
I’m longing to feel the warmth of you,
Sending warmth down my spine and skin.'

Beautiful!

(sp : shining, stanza 5.) x

[deeps]

This is so lovely, I enjoyed this

[Wicahpi]

This is so beautiful and how I feel
about my love. Nicely expressed!
I'm glad you entered this into my
"Longing For Love" contest!