Patagonia Lithia

The night shined brighter than ever,
The touch of the icy cool breeze,
Triggered my soul and made me freeze,
Looking straight, I saw her there…

Silky, smooth, toned, lean long legs,
Shinning in dim light nearly ready to impress,
She looked lovely in Patagonia Lithia dress
In satin black to fit her perfect carved figure…

The thin strand tied around her neck,
Wishing to be that lacy knot around her waist
To hold her near I was in such haste,
Oh my lady so beauteous and fair!

My heart pounded in every flare of her dress,
She walked near and oh! I skipped a beat,
The single kiss in icy breeze transferred heat,
Each day so fresh and new, she makes it anew….


**Patagonia Lithia- its a kind of women clothing..


Casual Wear

Jul 8, 2010

• CLOTHING
• Patagonia Lithia

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your poetry is always subtly created and this is no exception, my friend. The feelings build to a wonderful finale, gentle yet passionate, sincere and full of love.

'The single kiss in icy breeze transferred heat,' - beautiful phrase.

[Tina Kline]

This person is really in love! I like how this is so full of life and light, its very beautiful in its imagery. You captured the breath of life in this piece.

[R E Tree]

This has wonderful imagery from the start to the end. I felt very comfortable reading this. Nothing, not one line stopped the poems flow. It flows beautifully and romanticly. It also gets me into the mood for writing more about love and this could be a good inspiration

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful as is. I like the gentle description and slow movement of the poem. Poem flowed with a gentle ease and i like the very good ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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[Patagonia] familiar and a tease, right on the edge... of bliss. That kiss of reversals twist, my visions round. Mmm, yes tittillations please. With ease
you squeeze to some delight, my return from torturous work. Delayed time between the scenes of created splenders, rendered as friends.
Write wonder into my nights stars. To imagine, such as this!

For chance to ponder [Oh my lady so beauteous and fair!] as I have found such in my time away, to draw similarities to this beholding writ. [Wishing to be that lacy knot around her waist] such sensual splender. I can feel this crawling under my skin and, tothe Library it goes...
to further tender its Rose!

Mostly Poets World I found this to be awesome, although in reading over to see if I was imagining... but no, for me. There was a minor stall, some area where the knife could prune the small extra words. To better Cadence. Ha, opinions... everyone has them, hey? Awesome write...

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[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

your descriptives are sensually drawn~ what a beautiful serenade~ =)~

[deeps]

I"m not sure what the title says.
This is a wonderful sensual write.

[Wicahpi]

This is so sweet and sensual.
It's nice to read ' happiness' :)