Mermaid Love ♥♥♡

I relished being a fish,
swimming deep into seas,
crossing the turquoise borders
immersing into the emerald surface,
touching the spongy seagrass,
tickling the coral reefs.

I swirled up and high
dancing in glory
felt like touching the amethyst sky,
splashing the waters around,
causing ripples and waves,
there I saw you shimmering in moonlight.

My whole world missed a beat,
looking into your sea blue eyes,
fell into the oceans of love,
the touch of your hands,
gentle caress on my bosom,
bloomed within me a thousand flowers.

As your fingers slid down,
down my satin fresh skin,
I wished to no longer stay a mermaid,
I followed you to the shore,
fins fluttering in merriment,
you winked and I swam faster.

My souls touched the ecstasy,
heart beating in the rhythm of love,
you gestured me to leave,
but how could I???
I waited there till you left,
twitched, twirled, whirled, breathless …

Caught in the net you’d earlier spread,
washing to the shore,
heart beating fast,
faster, aching for one first last kiss,
capturing your image in my heart,
eyes turning cold, dropping down in thought of you…
























Awesome

Jun 28, 2010

• Poem 2 Poem
• Mermaid Love ♥♥♡

Cobalt Award

Jul 2, 2010

• BLUE
• Mermaid Love ♥♥♡

2nd

Jul 25, 2010

• What's in a rhyme?
• Mermaid Love ♥♥♡

Author's Note

I don't know how far this is good, just wrote this while sitting idle...

Reviews

[.]

wow what a passionate and vivid depliction you have captured. I was captivated and wanted it to go on. well done

[deeps]

This is beautiful i like this

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing poem about a mermaid

[Raivenne]

Much enjoyed.

[MagiCrystal]

Nice.. and not short... a good one.

[JENY]

Good….
I enjoyed it…..

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

Very nice write. The blue text adds a sweetness to the imagery. A love that never could be...lovely metaphor herein. Good job.

~True

[R E Tree]

I love the romance you have created in that poem. I adore the pictures and the blue font gives me imagery of the sea. I would have looked forward to see a first last kiss but you both didn't make it. But overall wonderful poem

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The sea and mermaids always can create a very good story. I like the detail and description in the poem. One of the oldest fantasies is to be saved by a beautiful mermaid and live in paradise. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[emma]

Great imagery. I really like this. You detail very well the way a person might feel after meeting someone who for whatever reason they can never have but who turns their world upside down and leaves them wanting more.