Kids In Summer

Kids In Summer

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh

















                     "Kids In Summer ☀☂"


During hot summer days,

When sun blaze bright,
Child plays flying kite.

                  Playing in scorching sun,
                  Holiday time fun starts,
                 They run chasing carts.

                                     No classes to attend,
                                    Summer tents extend high,
                                    Exams end, fears fly.

                  They love catching fish,
                  Their prayers wish small
                  Tiny fish for all!

Returning home at sunset,
Waiting to let in,
With wet dirty skin.













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AWARDS/ BADGES WON:

Winner

May 20, 2010


 

 

Bronze Summer!!!!

Feb 19, 2011

© 2011 Shalini Dinesh


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Firstly I loved the graphics and the colorful font and the way you indented it.
It's high time that I saw something colorful in writers cafe.

I felt really nostalgic after reading it ,it reminded me of my summer vacations. How I used to wait for that period every year.

No classes to attend,
Summer tents extend high,
Exams end, fears fly.

This freedom from books and studies was something we all cherished at some point in our lives.



Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww cute poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is delightful. A great poem about kids, summer and fun!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was cute.Made me miss my pud muddle days. :(
Haha,good work,it was really nice. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thats really cute, it made me smile.. It reminds me of how I used to spend my summers when my cousins still lived next door...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I remember as a kid just loving the summer. Outside from dusk til dawn! You express this joy of childhood so wonderfully, and the absolute pleasure of being wet and muddy at the end of the good day!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great concept love the format that’s what writing is all about, venturing out.
Good job keep it up


Posted 14 Years Ago


I love summer and as kid I did all this .. now i watch my little one enjoying summer.
It is just as fun now as it was then. For school children summer is a dream..

You have the Than Bauk down well. I am not informed about poetry styles.
Need to learn..
I like this summery fun filled poem, good luck in the contest and a happy summer to all.

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


This brings back lots of memories of when I was a kid. I use to love the summer as I use to eat ice-cream and swim in my swimming pool. I would worry about exams all the time and in the summer holiday my fears would go away

Posted 14 Years Ago


"Returning home at sunset,
Waiting to let in,
With wet dirty skin."

HAHAHA! I don't know what bemused me more. The memory of being the child getting dirty, and not understanding why my mother was so annoyed with me, or as the exasperated mother having to clean two filthy little boys and suddenly realizing I've got another seven weeks of this to look forward to. :)

Such a wonderfully lighthearted and sweet write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 18, 2010
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Shalini Dinesh
Shalini Dinesh

Flower Mound, TX



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I'm Shalini Dinesh, someone who finds joy in expressing thoughts and emotions through poetry. I have a deep love for colors, nature, and the calming sound of waves, all of which inspire my writing. My.. more..

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