CAt vs RAt

                 CAT Vs RAT

Nee nana na na,
Tintana na na,
The little rat came skating on the floor,
Sweeee, enjoying as a skater,
He landed on a platter.

Yippy yuppy yupupey,
Slurp slurp slurpepey,
He licked the cheese in joy,
Singing songs as he nibbled the cheese,
Nibbling little by little he finished a piece.

Grrrrrrr wrrrrrr,
Slurp! Slurp! Slurp!
The furry cat eyed the rat,
He pounced on the plate,
Alas! The rat escaped and he was late.

Ewwwwwwww,
Meowwwwwww,
The lady of the house screwed his ears,
Thinking that the cat messed the plate,
Leaving the one who actually ate.

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AWARDS/BADGES WON:

Winner

May 17, 2010

• Beautiful
• CAt vs RAt

Laughed till I cried!

Sep 10, 2011

• Make me laugh!
• CAt vs RAt

Reviews

[Simple_mee]

haha... This is so adorable. Tom & Jerry has been my fav. show since i was i was a child & this is just the perfect description of the fun they have :D

[hanzabonanza]

Lovely, lively poem- love your use of onomatopoeia really brought the poem to life!

[Aussie]

HA! This totally just made my day,amazing.Fantastic.

I love T&J,so that was a nice little bonus as well.

Fantabulistic work XD

[Tina Kline]

This is really fun and cute. I think children would really enjoy this!

[JENY]

I never knew that there was a child in you….
Good….work………I like it…..

[Coyote Poetry]

Life seem that way. The bad mouse got away and the cat is left holding the bag. A fun poem to read this afternoon. Thank you.
Coyote

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Finally made it by to read ...
This is very humorous.. just like Tom and Jerry..I like the 'language' of the mouse..
Very good and it would make for a good childrens' story.. thanks

Chloe

[Helen Crutchett]

lol....cute write and I agree with Tate that this would make a marvellous childrens' story if you could 'pad it out' a bit. Well done!

[Tate Morgan]

Ilike this You would make a good childrens book writer

[Brokensoul]

A dedication to best cartoon ever Tom and Jerry. Nice and funny !