Wood

In a forest so big and thick,
I found a stick,
Shining like gold,
Looked so old.

The stick smelled really so good,
Golden color wood,
Took it in my hand,
Dusted away the sand.

 Around it I tied a golden swag,
Carefully placed in bag,
This stick so good,
Was golden color sandalwood!

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

The scent in this poem brings me to a forest full and strong.. love it

[Joy Lynn B.]

Wow great piece and very creative!

[Aussie]

Ha,cute.I like it.

[Wicahpi]

A lovely poem crafted here.

However (sorry lol), you entered this into
my first Minute Poetry contest, so I must
point out the syllable counts.

3 stanzas of

8444
8444
8444
each.

I'm not sure I would conform this, or start over
on a fresh 'slate' for the contest; for I like this.

It's so up to you :)

[HorrorMaster]

very sweet

[The Water Queen]

The description of the wood made me feel like I was holding it. I could even smell the smell of the wood. That is amazing! This is a great and stunning write.

[Ian]

For this short poem i see the whole picture in front of me you admiring an object that people step over with thers something about out of all the things in the forest i have to pick you this was great

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you described something so simple with a magical tone. Sandalwood is on of my favorite smells.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such beautiful imagery here... each glimpse a piece of this wondrous world unveiled... One can see something ordinary becoming like gold... Wonderful!

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

You have "literally' broguht life into nature, great imagerry "Poet's World."