Naughty Ninny  ☃ ☀

Naughty Ninny ☃ ☀

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh

     
 
















         
                                  Naughty Ninny

Little ninny walked to school,

On the way she saw a pool,
Little ninny started to play,
Then her dress got stained in clay!

Never did her fear stop her from fun,
Forgot her school and played in hot sun,
Later she did take off her shoes,
On the road she heard cows moos.

To play barefoot was what she chose,
Little fish in pond nibbled her toes,
Giggling and wiggling she moved around,
Like a tiny squeaky bird she made a sound.

Enjoying her time, she jumped in joy,
She looked naughty like a little toy,
Water splashed and made her wet,
She was like tiny fish caught in net.

She went back home with mild fear,
Stood in front of mom and shed a drop of tear,
Her mom smiled and took her in,
Ninny walked in with a grin………


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Apr 12, 2010



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© 2011 Shalini Dinesh


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Lovely poem. It sound like a kid song.

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is such a celebration of freedom expressed through your words. That lightness of being a child and dancing in the puddles. Thank you for sharing the joy with us!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Although the meter's off and could be righted very easily.. I smiled the whole way through reading this .. it really does have a happy touch, both for children and adults who are only children grown up!

Have always loved water, still like being a ninny .. let's hear it for ninnies! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute =)
I like it how you show the fear of a child when she knows she's been naughty.
A nice family poem, Great write =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ian
This is something that kids can enjoy because the poem got the flow and its a good one. Loved it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very cute. I was a very naughty ninny when I was young and couldn't resist getting my feet wet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so sweet !! :) Very cute !!
Loved this !!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is cute and so well written.
I like this, enjoy to read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very cute this is something my daughter would do.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Dev
Aw.. this so reminds of someone I know well.. ME :P
haha.. I cud be poster girl for such mischief.. Nice write
I think the following are mistakes u can look into,, other than that a pleasurable read.

"Forgot her school and played in ^the^ hot sun,"
"To play with bare foot is what she chose," could be "To play barefoot is what she chose"



Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2010
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Tags: rhymes, nursery rhymes, kids poem, children

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Shalini Dinesh
Shalini Dinesh

Flower Mound, TX



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I'm Shalini Dinesh, someone who finds joy in expressing thoughts and emotions through poetry. I have a deep love for colors, nature, and the calming sound of waves, all of which inspire my writing. My.. more..

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