Naughty Ninny ☃ ☀

     
 
















         
                                  Naughty Ninny

Little ninny walked to school,
On the way she saw a pool,
Little ninny started to play,
Then her dress got stained in clay!

Never did her fear stop her from fun,
Forgot her school and played in hot sun,
Later she did take off her shoes,
On the road she heard cows moos.

To play barefoot was what she chose,
Little fish in pond nibbled her toes,
Giggling and wiggling she moved around,
Like a tiny squeaky bird she made a sound.

Enjoying her time, she jumped in joy,
She looked naughty like a little toy,
Water splashed and made her wet,
She was like tiny fish caught in net.

She went back home with mild fear,
Stood in front of mom and shed a drop of tear,
Her mom smiled and took her in,
Ninny walked in with a grin………

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Oh So Happy!

Apr 12, 2010

• Paint Me Happy
• Naughty Ninny ☃ ☀

Honorable Mention

Apr 15, 2010

• Nursery Rhymes Revisited
• Naughty Ninny ☃ ☀

 Silver Medal 

May 9, 2010

• Childhood Play Contest
• Naughty Ninny ☃ ☀

You made it!

Jan 4, 2011

• Let's Make A Book!
• Naughty Ninny ☃ ☀

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Super cute :)

[Lorraine]

It's like a higher level nursery rhyme. I had fun following around the naughty kid's random wanderings. You sure portrayed a little girl in all her childish glory. Very fascinating, indeed.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[MagiCrystal]

This is adorable.. aw

[MissWordSmith]

This was just so cute. Though the flow was a little off at times, it still was a cute poem. really cute. and Ninny! was an adorable pre-school name :P

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yes a nursery rhyme with rhythm and flow.
Great write well done

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning nursery rhyme poem.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This is adorable. Loved it.

[Wicahpi]

With a little tweek here and a little tweek there,
this would be perfect. Though it is adorable, the
flow (meter) could use that tweek to make it read
smoothly from the lips. Reminds me of days of old.

[Doreen]

This is very cute. The carefree, fun-loving quality of a child. They see the world as a big and magnificent place. I liked the way you ended this also. Very nice write.

[rachielle]

This is such a cute poem. It's like a nursery rhyme. Great job:)