I Wish To Give Him!

                                            

                                      I Wished To Give Him

                                                          There

                                                       He stands

                                                     With a rose

                                             And a bright smile,

                                        Wishing I would take it!

                                Nothing else other than pure love

                                              Was all that he had!

                                              I truly admired him,

                                                  Wished to give

                                               Something special

                                                       “LOVE”.....

Author's Note

my first attempt in tetracyts style of writing, wrote this for a contest...

Reviews

[Bette]

i think you did a good job.:)

[emmajoy]

Beautifully done .. both in content and style ..

[Prateeksha Khot]

short and sweet. I liked it

[maryjaneuy]

i agree with simplee_mee. it's simple and cute. good luck for the contest.

[MagiCrystal]

Love can blow us away....with a face and a rose...pure love
for sure.. hands down... a good one!

[Dev]

Yeah I saw the contest too.. I like this !!

[Simple_mee]

It was nice. short n sweet !! :)