I can SEE

I can see, the sun’s rays brightening,
The rays that’s well and divinely being spread,
The stars at night, silvery and glistening,
Will also energize the person in deathbed,
The power that mesmerize,
Is something that nothing else can compromise!

I can see, the care and love that the mother shows,
The guidance and security that the father provides,
Is something that we can’t repay beyond owes
This fondness deep within resides,
What more bonds can you ask for?
This relationship continues from days of yore.

I can see, the beauty of friendship so green,
The company and attitude of sharing,
Your thoughts and heart so clean and is well seen,
The confidant in you, I can share any secret so daring,
The friend that walks all along
Not worrying about others and come with me for lifelong.

All of the above I can see,
The pure care and share, the fine shine,
With all this, my future I can foresee,
Am so happy that you are mine
The above all I can see, I can see them in your eyes,
The love so true, with no false, no guilt or lies.


Fantastic

May 13, 2010

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Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful image, flowing into the deeply profound imagery of your words... Oh the security, the joy, the peace found within the one you love and cherish... Wonderful, lifting write!

[Simple_mee]

Great work from ur pen yet again. I really enjoyed reading this one.
Anyways in the last line I guess U meant to write "guilt" instead of "guilty"...
;)

[Dev]

""All of the above I can see,
The pure care and share, the fine shine,
With all this, my future I can foresee,
Am so happy that you are mine
The above all I can see, I can see them in your eyes,
The love so true, with no false, no guilty or lies.""

These lines are soo good.. !! Resonates in the whole poem .. good job.. love the picture in the beginning too !! :D