I look at my now empty palm, feeling the loneliness of my hand, wondering when you slid so calm, as a silent tear slid down my eye, I sit here in doomed darkness, regretting it to be "how and why?" never did i think i can do it on own, the darkened fear of loneliness kills making my weekend heart awfully torn, as i walk so soulless and in pain,
thinking of those past memories, which all now just nothing but vain, how can life take its easiest turn, throwing me on its sharpest edge, My heart pitilessly in melancholy churn, death blackens not you but me, as i look up at the glittering stars, searching for you, if only i can see! tears don't mend a depressed heart, they just make it empty yet heavy, as it has taken away a dearest part!
Oh love, this is desperately sad, the feeling of alone-ness is so apparent. Your more than fine writing hides such fragility and if its source is fact, so wish i could hug you some comfort. '.. as I walk so soulless and in pain, thinking of those past memories .. '
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear... the poem is a partial fact in remembrance of my lost friend.
I did not notice my tears that hid in my eyes until I could not read your words. Believe me, your words are very powerful so much that I am deeply moved.
Oh love, this is desperately sad, the feeling of alone-ness is so apparent. Your more than fine writing hides such fragility and if its source is fact, so wish i could hug you some comfort. '.. as I walk so soulless and in pain, thinking of those past memories .. '
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear... the poem is a partial fact in remembrance of my lost friend.
The way you mention the heaviness of emptiness is impressive and true.
Some losses are so permanent that they are hard to comprehend. Seeking
the stars at the end is a beautiful image & a hopeful sign. xxx
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your review, and yes the loss of certain people in life is just beyond sadness.. read moreThank you so much for your review, and yes the loss of certain people in life is just beyond sadness and tears...
I'm Shalini Dinesh, someone who finds joy in expressing thoughts and emotions through poetry. I have a deep love for colors, nature, and the calming sound of waves, all of which inspire my writing. My.. more..