Where hid HE?

How I glided high as an eagle,

Lonely as I soared above cliffs,

Peace, I searched as I flew,

Finally did I find in something true?

 

Lonely as I soared above cliffs,

As my mind wonders wide,

Nowhere to go, thought did I?

 

Peace, I searched as I flew,

In lands, seas, people nor things,

Found no peace, where hid he?

 

Finally did I find in something true?

For deep within my heart hid he,

For the Lord hid peace within me!

Reviews

[FocusedAmnesia]

I found this very peaceful, though I had to read it a couple times because of the people around me.

[Sarah]

Lovely, Its very powerful and well worded.

[Tina Kline]

A very powerful write with beautiful imagery. Most of us if not all search for peace and it does seem to me if we can't find it within ours selves with will be hard to find it any where else. The Lord can show us if we care to seek, listen and learn. A very creative and wonderful poem!

[Shalini Dinesh]

Thank you so much for the review :)

[sarah]

Praise the Lord! great write

[Shalini Dinesh]

Thank you so much for the review :)

[An owl on the moon]

What a wondrous insight into your heart and soul... how loneliness and pain can overwhelm, yet the Lord is found so near in time of need... Peace is never out of reach no matter what we face. Lifting in every way!

[Shalini Dinesh]

Thank you so much for the review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"For deep within my heart hid he,
For the Lord hid peace within me!"
Some questions are can be answer with some thoughts into inter mind and heart. A strong ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote

[Shalini Dinesh]

Thank you so much for the review :)

[Helen Crutchett]

Ah beautifully done! A precious write...that you for submitting this to our Trimeric Contest! Helena

[Shalini Dinesh]

Thank you so much for the review, glad you liked it :)