My Asylum

My Asylum

A Poem by shallimarRose
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My Asylum

 

Ranting alone to the four walls

lucid thoughts dissipate in the dark

 heart soul and mind

conjoined but not in uniscience

contrived yet not convinced

mute yet maligned

controversial conversation

with myself and yet

I always seem to lose

the battle of silent words

both minds raging onward

in the darkness

where black shines brightly

 silence is deafening

 you

the driving force

bringing me to this place

lost between two worlds

 heart and mind at odds

forever keeping my love

locked away in

my asylum

 

aka shallimarRose

 

uni-science…don’t know if that is the right spelling

meaning all together…all in one, all science in one place

© 2013 shallimarRose


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shallimarRose
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Once again you have beautifully worded such an awful place to be.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

LOL I think auto spell check got you.. or at least I hope it did.. lol
You meant Awesome may.. read more
I' just going to take this opportunity to let you know that I love your work! This is wonderful, it's a really accurate depiction of aggressive or twisted inner dialogue, and the centred presentation and placement of verse is vey effective.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and the nice compliment.. Rose
Part of the torment of heartbreak comes from the disassociation between heart and mind. They are at odds with each other where passion is concerned.

A touching and profound piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rubie.. xo Rose
alone with our thoughts and feelings can be an impossible battle. add deepening levels of anxiety and one can never sort things out. great disappointment and depression lock things up...love your poem..i feel the pain...
E.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sye
R...have to think about this one. I'll come back to it later...bobc

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Bob.. I'm not of sound mind tonight/morning either so I will go in and look at it more lat.. read more
bobc

11 Years Ago

Of course, I have other thoughts here. (smiling as I write this) First things first...get the comput.. read more
shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

I redid the poem but cannot edit here.. or on any of my poems on either computer.. I have messaged a.. read more
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This is a lonely place and the one that took you there should be drawn and quartered.


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shallimarRose
shallimarRose

F W, WA



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I am a singer, writer, poet, dreamer, believer..... I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..

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