yes, life goes on, but the pain of loss also goes on.... sometimes for way to long... your images are starkly sad Rose.. even that small green vine, if not nurtured, watered and receptive to the warmth of the sun will also wither... so, please stretch further, strengthen and grow... damn the termites!!! ---redzone
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Thank you Redzone for coming to read and your wisdom.. Rose
yes, life goes on, but the pain of loss also goes on.... sometimes for way to long... your images are starkly sad Rose.. even that small green vine, if not nurtured, watered and receptive to the warmth of the sun will also wither... so, please stretch further, strengthen and grow... damn the termites!!! ---redzone
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Redzone for coming to read and your wisdom.. Rose
Yes, in broken places there are hopeful traces. Your poem inspired me to write this gift poem for you:
Life
In spite of trouble,
there are surprises.
Up from burnt stubble
a forest rises.
Out from old rubble
life mobilizes.
Inside its bubble,
life crystallizes.
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11 Years Ago
Thats lovely.. I see like me the gift of rhyme is in you.. Thank you Aethereal.. Rose
11 Years Ago
You're welcome, Rose. Here you have inspired another poem that wouldn't have been written otherwise... read moreYou're welcome, Rose. Here you have inspired another poem that wouldn't have been written otherwise. You may keep this poem as your own. I wrote it in five minutes.
yes.. I do that too.. No you should take it and keep going with it.. post it it may well inspire or .. read moreyes.. I do that too.. No you should take it and keep going with it.. post it it may well inspire or help another in need.. I have an excersize I do in which i set a 3 minute egg timer and let my ink loose.. lol some of my best poems have been eggtimer specials.. xo
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If you insist, then I'll keep this poem as my own, but I'll need to develop it more before posting i.. read moreIf you insist, then I'll keep this poem as my own, but I'll need to develop it more before posting it on my page. Between each couplet there should be a quatrain adding detail to each couplet written in italics. The poem would be in eight parts.
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Nice touch.. my rr are off when its finished send me the link.. xo
R...quite get this. Good free verse and a nice read. One very small thing...'...Wood cracks and peels...'. Maybe you meant 'Wood cracks and paint peels'. Just a suggestion...bobc
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Thank you Bob.. I do believe wood also splinters and peels.. I will think about the change.. I do se.. read moreThank you Bob.. I do believe wood also splinters and peels.. I will think about the change.. I do see your point. thank you.. xo Rose
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I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..