Concerto

Concerto

A Poem by shallimarRose
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prelude to a dream...

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Concerto



Romance me to the edge of moonlight

play me like a an old love song

 waltz my interlude of emotions

strum my heart strings 

but don't string me along


Sonatas fill desires soft

your lips whisper in gentle blows

like my maestro tend my needs

 set the music sheets a glow


Orchestrate my movements

my chords, yours to posses

play with all my gentle notes

my cymbals tremble I must confess


Make me sing crescendo's

loud like a trumpets scream

feel the tremors of the chords

a prelude to a dream


play accelerando' now

the music picks up speed

perhaps the last cadenza

will fulfill my aching need...


bj smith

aka shallimarRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Masterpiece is a term that should be used with care, but I do believe you've penned a masterpiece here Rosebud...I LOVE poetry that equates music with lovemaking, especially classical, where strings are involved, and you've certainly pulled all the right strings of this reader...this poem takes the metaphor into incredible depths of romance and sensuality...I love this one :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

:) thank you Steve... and thank you for the lovely gift.. huggs, Rose
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Always a pleasure Rosebud...glad you liked it :) xo



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This was gorgeous rose I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Awww thank you rose.. xo
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For a moment I thought that was Zamfir playing. He is quite good with the pan-flute, which is what is being played above.

As for the concerto momento, Shallimar, there is no reason to 18+ this. You are showing perfectly clothed personage with no profanity in your words. You could rate it for TEENS it and increase your readership.

As for the poem itself. Many people have always associated music with emotion. I think it has to do with the fact that even as humans, despite being fiercely independent and telling ourselves we are the most intelligent species in the galaxy, deep inside we all have an instinct.

And that is to reflect and smile and to get lost in our thoughts - to beautiful and memorable music, no matter your age, occupation, or upbringing.

Your words speak true and tell of love and passion - most musically and harmonically. :)


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Creatively sensual... music and our sexuality have always gone hand and hand, you've represented that well in this wonderful piece.

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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you poetic.. Im pleased you came by to read.. xo Rose
Wow...just wow...beautiful work x

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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Poppy for dropping by to read.. humbled by your comments sometimes.. xo Rose
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BL

Image, font and video really add to this and are well worked into this subtly erotic piece I feel. Music can be a great bringer of love in itself and its different tones and tempos reflect the moods we feel, sometimes a waltz is too slow and we need to go Punk Rock for a while, so allegro allegro, lt us briskly move to the cresendo at the end!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

You understand your music. I am pleased that you got this and enjoyed .. Rose
BL

11 Years Ago

I really enjoyed it, thank you again
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Sue
I love the use of musical images to show desire and passion - another great poem :)

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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sue.. I am overdue to visit your page.. I will make my way over there.. xo Rose
Sorry I have not read you lately, was in hospital.

I adore that song, Rose! It has to be my ultimate favourite song ever. This is a poem full or desire and passion and you've written it amazingly well.

Great job.


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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

its one of my favorites too sye and this is my favorite version of it.. I may use it as my walking d.. read more
A beautiful journey in your poem. Good to fall into desire and passion. I like the use of music to make your point in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you sweet Coyote for taking the time.. Rose
Everything from the title to the font to the wordplay combines perfectly in Concerto, to create what I find to be an example of truly magnificent poetry. :)

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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Why thank you Lily.. What a lovely compliment. shallimarRose
Sensual, sexy and sizzling. I love it!

:) Julie

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shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Julie... I appreciate the read and review.. Rose

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I am a singer, writer, poet, dreamer, believer..... I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..

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