Masterpiece is a term that should be used with care, but I do believe you've penned a masterpiece here Rosebud...I LOVE poetry that equates music with lovemaking, especially classical, where strings are involved, and you've certainly pulled all the right strings of this reader...this poem takes the metaphor into incredible depths of romance and sensuality...I love this one :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
:) thank you Steve... and thank you for the lovely gift.. huggs, Rose
11 Years Ago
Always a pleasure Rosebud...glad you liked it :) xo
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For a moment I thought that was Zamfir playing. He is quite good with the pan-flute, which is what is being played above.
As for the concerto momento, Shallimar, there is no reason to 18+ this. You are showing perfectly clothed personage with no profanity in your words. You could rate it for TEENS it and increase your readership.
As for the poem itself. Many people have always associated music with emotion. I think it has to do with the fact that even as humans, despite being fiercely independent and telling ourselves we are the most intelligent species in the galaxy, deep inside we all have an instinct.
And that is to reflect and smile and to get lost in our thoughts - to beautiful and memorable music, no matter your age, occupation, or upbringing.
Your words speak true and tell of love and passion - most musically and harmonically. :)
Image, font and video really add to this and are well worked into this subtly erotic piece I feel. Music can be a great bringer of love in itself and its different tones and tempos reflect the moods we feel, sometimes a waltz is too slow and we need to go Punk Rock for a while, so allegro allegro, lt us briskly move to the cresendo at the end!
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11 Years Ago
You understand your music. I am pleased that you got this and enjoyed .. Rose
Sorry I have not read you lately, was in hospital.
I adore that song, Rose! It has to be my ultimate favourite song ever. This is a poem full or desire and passion and you've written it amazingly well.
Great job.
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11 Years Ago
its one of my favorites too sye and this is my favorite version of it.. I may use it as my walking d.. read moreits one of my favorites too sye and this is my favorite version of it.. I may use it as my walking down the isle music.. huggs, rose
A beautiful journey in your poem. Good to fall into desire and passion. I like the use of music to make your point in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Everything from the title to the font to the wordplay combines perfectly in Concerto, to create what I find to be an example of truly magnificent poetry. :)
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11 Years Ago
Why thank you Lily.. What a lovely compliment. shallimarRose
I am a singer, writer, poet, dreamer, believer.....
I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..