Concerto

Concerto

Romance me to the edge of moonlight

play me like a an old love song

 waltz my interlude of emotions

strum my heart strings 

but don't string me along

Sonatas fill desires soft

your lips whisper in gentle blows

like my maestro tend my needs

 set the music sheets a glow

Orchestrate my movements

my chords, yours to posses

play with all my gentle notes

my cymbals tremble I must confess

Make me sing crescendo's

loud like a trumpets scream

feel the tremors of the chords

a prelude to a dream

play accelerando' now

the music picks up speed

perhaps the last cadenza

will fulfill my aching need...

bj smith

aka shallimarRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Masterpiece is a term that should be used with care, but I do believe you've penned a masterpiece here Rosebud...I LOVE poetry that equates music with lovemaking, especially classical, where strings are involved, and you've certainly pulled all the right strings of this reader...this poem takes the metaphor into incredible depths of romance and sensuality...I love this one :)

[shallimarRose]

:) thank you Steve... and thank you for the lovely gift.. huggs, Rose

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure Rosebud...glad you liked it :) xo

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

An absolutely beautiful piece of work. Very sensual and romantic with a classical feel. Enjoyed!

[shallimarRose]

Thank you Sharon I appreciate your coming to read.. rose

[redflutterby]

A sensuous musical piece... One of your best I'd say!! Beautiful!!

[shallimarRose]

Thank you red.. xo

[Richie]

This is a beautiful love poem, and the combination with Unchained Melody on the flute - all I can add is maravilloso/marvellous

[shallimarRose]

Thank you my friend.. Glad you are here I have missed you.. hugs, Rose

[Jack...]

Sweetly sung my friend. This was enchanting and mystical. I could hear the rythym of the music and the soft flow of love. Very nicely done.

[shallimarRose]

Thank you Jack for reading... Huugs, Rose

[Keith]

Unchained Melody is my absolute favourite! I haven't heard this version, so awesome on the pan flute. Its georgeous Rose.

[shallimarRose]

Thank you... its my favorite version.. I love the pan flute.. but you should hear me sing this.. **winks** maybe ill record it sometime for you.. xo Rose

[Keith]

Oh yes please......

[Michael G. Smith]

Ah, the sweet music of seduction.

[shallimarRose]

Thank you MG...for taking the time to read and review... shallimarRose

[Michael G. Smith]

It was benefit to a better day.

[B-poet]

A lovely write Rose. Great work. A eloquently compelling read. :)

[shallimarRose]

Thank you Bpoet.. I appreciate your coming to read.. xo Rose

[Aethereal]

This poem inspires my imagination with its moods expressed through dance, moonlight, and music. It inspired me to write my latest poem "Romantic Lullaby". Thanks for the inspiration, Rose!

[shallimarRose]

Thank you for reading and the review.. I appreciate your taking the time.. xo

[Rene Velez]

I like the play on words with this one, sensual and moving, a silent song...

[shallimarRose]

Thank you Rene.. I appreciate your taking the time.. Rose