Never Ending Love Affair

Never Ending Love Affair

A Poem by shallimarRose


white jasmine and lilacs

the sunset was hung

with purples and pinks

still I was quite young

the first time I met him

the last day of school

I was not looking

but he seemed quite cool

so demurehe was sitting

near the library door

somehow I never saw him

though I'd been there before

.....romance from him dripped

so I came back each day

and on that very spot

we would make love and play

he led me to feel

things I had never felt

he forced me to see things

with which I never had dealt

 since that first day I found him

this affair had begun

we shared sweet romance

Spring love

 Summer fun

nutmeg stories in Autumn

and soft winters haze

so I vowed I would love him

til the end of my days

nothing and no-one

 made me feel quite the same

I fell deeply in love

Poetry was his name


bj smith

aka shallimarRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Oh! The last line surprised me! Very nicely done. I enjoyed this piece so much, ShaillimarRose. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Angi.. I am glad you liked it.. you can call me shallimar (Rose will also do) huggs!
What a perfect ending, I didn't see it coming!

'nutmeg stories in Autumn'

Stellar line, the entire poem is, love this one shallimar! Going in my library...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

lolol... shallimarRose is my pen name.. On all other sites I had been known as shallimar untill 2 1/.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My sister's name is Barbara, I like shallimar, I can type that high. ;-)
shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

lol so the ones who call me shallimar I am more then happy to sign that.. the ones who like Rose I s.. read more
Definitely easy to fall in love with, but oh so moody. :)

Very nicely done sweet Rose. Indeed poetry is a love affair.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jack... yes very moody ...lol My love affair with Poetry began when I was about twelve or.. read more
I found this interesting. Especially how you linked up poetry as a masculine. There's a neat flow too, hence a good poem! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Well I had to make it a male to work my theme and also one of my first real loves in poetry was Robe.. read more
Alia ZJ.

11 Years Ago

The pleasure's all mine for this excellent poem! :)

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shallimarRose

F W, WA



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I am a singer, writer, poet, dreamer, believer..... I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..

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