Solitude

Solitude

A Poem by shallimarRose

 



Alone, the three of us

Just me myself and I

We watch the sun rise and set

We talk among-st ourselves

And I realize

Sometimes I

am all I need


Solitude!


bj smith 

aka shallimarRose

© 2013 shallimarRose


Author's Note

shallimarRose
Feel free to comment/critique.. Thanks for reading.. shallimarRose

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And I realize
Sometimes I
am all I need-- these are great lines.

I love the feeling in this piece, the overall concept that is driving forward the idea that a person can actually rejoice in the feeling of solitude. Sometimes being alone with our own mind is the best thing for a person; we are able to truly understand ourselves in these moments. Beautifully done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you and yes.. I just wish the other two people in my head would stop talking sometimes... lol .. read more



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Ego Id and Superego conjoining to make the perfect whole as one with the environment. Smashing as long as one does not fall out with the others.
Nice tone and feeling.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Alex.. I am a Gemini so there are actually two of me (personalities) already.. hmmm wonder.. read more
A very good write about enjoying solitude that is short, concise and succinct. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free verse. Flow is good as is the line to line transition and breaks. Good depth of feeling. I can relate. Well penned. Write on!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you shelly.. xo
ShelleyA

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. Have a great day!

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Added on July 21, 2013
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Tags: solitude, alone, self preservation, contimplation, poetry, poem, shallimarRose

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shallimarRose
shallimarRose

F W, WA



About
I am a singer, writer, poet, dreamer, believer..... I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..

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