brick house (REMIX)

brick house (REMIX)

A Poem by shakira
"

about this girl named belle

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 Belle's a brick.........house

she mighty fat and thats a fact just lettin it all hang out

belle's a brick...........house

she mighty big just like a pig lettin it all just jigg

belle's a brick....house she's mighty fat, bigger than a bat 

hairy as a cat showin all her fat 

yaaeeeehhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!

© 2009 shakira


Author's Note

shakira
hope u like it belle

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Ha ha! This was really funny! XD

Posted 14 Years Ago


hahaahhahahah lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


This, coupled with the contest you've just posted, does make it look a little like you're bullying this Belle... let's hope this is a character you've just made up, eh? Let's hope she has the strength to rise above it.

Of course, you might just be being clever in highlighting how hurtful, mean and childish this sort of action is...

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hi,
Wow this is very very different well done
xxxx

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 7, 2009

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shakira
shakira

newport news, VA



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my name is shakira and i attend richneck elementary school and i play basketball,i like soccer,double dutch,and cheerleading. more..

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