A Crazy Day In A Crazy Way

My FRist Strip Set ,

I awake to a brezze from the winter

Time trees to grab some ice cold water

I step out of bed to an nail

In my head an pulled it like

A feather I sit back,

In bed with a hole

In my head then

Got my self

Together

I

Then get

Dress an try

My best to make

It to school on time

Now im hear in this blue

Chair to pass my high school year

Next im home all alone to take

My after school nap then Im awake to

A smile in my face from my other brother.

Reviews

[Ms.Bri]

..Very interesting and well written! I love the concept of the poem. Outstanding I can tell you have a passion for writing no matter what the topic is. Keep on writing

[UnOrThOdOx]

Interesting. The stanzas (structure of the poem) were really placed interestingly. I enjoyed it. Keep writing!! I can see you have a great growing experience in the writing world. (=