Twist in the Plot

I am sickened by you, you disgust me so

You retched beast from down below

You fiend, you worthless piece of scum

You sicken me you heartless bum

 

You plagued my morals and made me question myself

The sheer amount of hate I feel toward you cannot be helped

And you still think you have any rights left after what you have done?

You deserved to be thrown in the dungeon yet you got the chance to run

And oh how stupid you are to have returned to the scene of the crime

I will not spare you my wrath a third time

 

So be gone you, I have shown mercy again.

 You can try, but I cannot be slain.

My friend, little do you know

How much you have hurt me so.

 

And even today, I am loyal to you

By your side I will stand

I will help you whenever you need me,

We will still fight life’s monsters hand in hand.

My friend, please leave me be.

What pains me is deeper than what you can see.

 

I am sorry I have let you down.

No matter what I do, I am hell bound. 

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

"So be gone you, I have shown mercy again.
You can try, but I cannot be slain.
My friend, little do you know
How much you have hurt me so."

Cemented in pain. This is a really good poem.

[Coll Silvermoon]

I like this poem. It speaks volumes to strife and pain.

[Jennifer]

this is a really good poem. The emotion is so raw and real. I hope that you can heal from the hurt that this person has caused you.

[Shahrier]

Thanks, Most of my poems have raw emotions, but many of them aren't that well written. I dont post my really good poems here because the writerscafe people don't review for fakes and all that. I must admit, I get more review here, but... it seems less professional.