tat poem

I live for the nights

i wont rember

 

The freinds ill never

forget

 

To memories that will

stay forever

 

This is my lifetime

and more to come

 

untill thy soul returns

to home.

Reviews

[♪GetUse2MyMelodie..]

Nice poem =)

[BluesForTheRisingSun]

This a really nice poem, with only one spelling mistake "Friends" (Which is probably a typo), Short but good. Keep up the great work :)

[O Bubbly_snowflake *]

Has an interesting punch to it...
Its pretty good, a great start. The message is nice

[Hippy]

good good man i think it would be better if you capitolized you I's and if you spelled remember correctly and i (not saying you have to) capitolize the first letter of each stanza not trying to put down your work man just trying to make it shine its art for sure just gotta polish up the edges you dig?