Holiday Alone

I ate

all the candy

you sent me,

in an envelope

full of promise,

as I waited

for more than

just a letter.

The city comes to life,

dancing to the early night,

new aroma's rise,

new flavours tried...

But I need the flavour I know best.

Did you get my postcard?

I can't wait till you do.

The room I stay in

is very small.

But two would fit easily!

Just don't bring any luggage...

Here we are,

exchanging letters,

like renaissance lovers.

From a new side

of the world.

Just not the same one.

And I count the stars

in our whoniverse,

your poems in my hands,

haunting my fears,

giving me peace.

It makes no sense,

going on a holiday alone,

when your destination 

is back home.

Reviews

[Muse]

It makes no sense,
going on a holiday alone,
when your destination
is back home.

This would be beautiful...as one thought all on its own. Good work. I love it.

[Whiskurz]

A Sad but beautiful write......Whisk