Newborn

Newborn

A Poem by .:Arianna:.
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One of my favourite animals, and sadly one of the most unlucky ones, being brutally slaughtered by brainless and corrupted people that should burn at the stake.

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In darkest night,

under crystal snow blanket;

she opens her eyes...

© 2012 .:Arianna:.


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Sounds like a girl to me, she opened her eyes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love a well-written, powerful haiku :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


powerful poem........good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh I know...it's senseless killing.. So brutal on the little innocents.. xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


The light and the dark aspects of the first two lines make the last line all the more powerful. I like this style of poetry, and you seem to have mastered it, using the entire poem for its optimal powerful value. Great work, really.

Posted 13 Years Ago


powerful and vivid and sad,well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is quite brief yet powerful in its message!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 12, 2011
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.:Arianna:.
.:Arianna:.

Amsterdam, Netherlands



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Welcome to my page and thank you for stopping by. I am Arianna, half Dutch, half Greek, half explorer, half philosopher. I was born in Amsterdam but at the age of one I moved with my parents to Greece.. more..

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