A deaf composition

The simplicity and ease of my survival without you...

    ....but so deafening the silence...

                ... in my soul...

Reviews

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

i am such a lover of the small poem form. there is something so magic when a whole world can be told, in just a few lines..

you hold true to the form.. offering a gently melancholic image, one that i know, intimately. the spare phrasing, title to end line, it all works.. wonderful

[Cherrie Palmer]

You should picture the lover of this poem and write a respone.
very nice piece